Monday, June 8, 2009

A Story of Unraveling

This is just a short narrative I wrote. What do you think? Yes, I'm reading it off the computer and still getting everything wrong ... Here's end of it. I wrote out the whole thing but it took up too much space.
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Finally I figure out my next move. I get up, grab the empty bowl and take it purposely into the kitchen so I can restock the chips for everyone, go back inside make a joke like "Don't worry, I brought reinforcements," and everybody thinks I'm great again...or something...and who's in the kitchen? You! So I utter an incomplete sentence, "Uh, needed more chips, so..." And you offer me you a charming smile and say, "Well, you came to the right place then, didn't you?" You move in closer and wink. This throws me off somehow. I narrow my eyes at you in response, I do that. I think I can squeeze you into a neat little box by squinting my eyes. I can not. You think I'm glaring. So suddenly I grin. Now I'm just weird.
,,,,,, to be continued....
way past my bedtime right now.

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